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knock.. knock?
An opportunity knocked
at her doorstep
She hesitated...
A while later
she heard a little knock again
This time she opened,
but to her disappointment
this time,
It was her husband
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ABOUT LACHLANWOLVES
NAME: LachlanWolves
Lachlan- (LOCK-lin)
Coming from the Gaelic word for Scandinavia, Lochlann, its meanings includes "from the land of lakes."
LachlanWolves come from a very interesting background. Like most animals they once where socialized and lived in colonies. But when a large storm came over Leith it changed the world forever. Bringing ruin over the lands, the Lachlan wolves retreated to cover in secluded groups. Some resorted to wetlands, where they passed away and became one with the land they resorted to. Every LachlanWolf Is a ghost of their past selves. Many features tell stories from their past (past fights, scars, rotting flesh,
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Excision
This is the only way to cure it. Would you trust someone who’s never been? Now listen: you need to get yourself a rope. Coarse preferably. Tie it as close as you can to the wound. Make it tight enough to starve it of its origin. Isolate the damage. Let the abrasion as you move distract its cause for you. Let it twist and spark and scrape away the rust into a clean flame. Take the flame and douse your fingertips as deep as you can, then deeper every time. Work your way up to the knuckle. If it scalds, good. Let it erase the infected nest from the forefront of your mind. The problem is self-constructed; unnatural, not organic on
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Day 26 is David Bowie day! Pretty much came up from the line in Rebel Rebel "Your mother doesn't know if you're a boy or a girl." It's also a nasty-ass challenge, to include two major changes (the second one was the narrator quitting at the end), ten made-up words, (akash wheetle milklings maledictic bicking glimming mutinize gobbing goddessliness fod), a five-year timeskip/period over which the story takes place and include the five senses.
I'll be honest, I don't like this. It's rushed, and you can tell I was squeezing the made-up words in. Also, It was getting to be midnight when I started, so I didn't have time to think up anything else. Really, I'm only submitting this one as something to submit.
I'll be honest, I don't like this. It's rushed, and you can tell I was squeezing the made-up words in. Also, It was getting to be midnight when I started, so I didn't have time to think up anything else. Really, I'm only submitting this one as something to submit.
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This was excellent. Best opening--->“Brenna, you can’t just go disintegrating people!”I love this-->Brenna’s eyes sparked, but I’d been around her for too long to take the danger seriously. “Why? Just because you’re a man, you have to protect me?”
“No, Bren, it’s just-”
“Because even your women, pathetic milklings that they are, can defend themselves. They don’t need men for everything.”
Also this--->I gaped at her. “What would make you think I would go anywhere with you again, you divine piece of fod? I never want to have anything to do with you or any other god as long as I live, and preferably even after I die! I quit!”